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AnimationMentor Session 203 Revision

I got a really helpful video critique from Victor on Sunday. He pointed out list of things to fix and after fixing them, the shot looks a whole lot better. Well, in my opinion it looks better. The first half doesn't bother me as much. My favorite criticism was about the last leg lift. Victor said it looked like a dog scratching itself. Ha Ha! It really did. Check out my last post and see for yourself.

Anyway, hopefully this is the last or at least the second to last revision for this shot. Frankly, I'm ready to move on. The next assignment, which I will talk about more at the end of the week, involves a full body character (minus arms) who needs to jump across a series of circular platforms (like the tops of telephone poles).

Comments

Wow, what a difference! Great job on the finishing touches. The leg pump fix at the end makes for a much more consistent scene. I just love the dramatic fluid movements of your character. He's so dainty!

I like the lighter colors used in this one. Makes it fun.

I agree with your mentor! This one is so much better with the lighter colors and the corrected doggy hitch. Good job.

Dad

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