[WIP] The Collector
Like my two person dialogue shot entry, I'd like to take you through the various steps in the making of my short film. Please keep in mind that this is still a work in progress. I have only made it to step 11. Over the next month, I will finish it and post it in a separate entry.
Here are the steps in order:
1. Brainstorm and write down a number of different stories
2. Narrow the stories down to 5 of the best ones
3. Choose the top 2 ideas, refine them, and pitch them to the class
4. Choose the best story, develop it, and then pitch it to the class again.
5. Storyboard the whole film.
6. Create an animatic with the storyboard panels and a scratch track
7. Layout the entire film with the set, props and character
8. Blocking Pass
9. Blocking Plus Pass
10. First Polish Pass
11. Second Polish Pass
12. Final Polish Pass
13. Replace scratch track with final sound and music
14. Lighting/Rendering
15. Compositing
As you can see, there are quite a few steps involved in making a short film. Steps 5 through 11 each took 3 weeks to complete, so a lot of time is involved as well. I hope you enjoy the following videos that show the end product of each step. You might want to watch the last video first and then go back and see how the short evolved. Enjoy!
Step 2 Written Pitches
Buried Treasure
We open with a pirate on a large flat beach standing next to a treasure chest with a shovel looking around to see if anyone is watching. Once he’s certain that he’s not being watched, he begins to dig a hole in the sand. He digs part of the hole and then moves on to the other side. As he’s digging with his back to the other side of the hole, the sand slides back in. When he finishes with second half, he’s surprised that the first half has filled back up. He digs out the first half again, but the second half fill up. He discovers that the sand will only slide back in when he’s not watching, so tries digging one half of the hole while looking at the other. The side that he’s digging this time is constantly filling back up after every scoop. He looks back at the half that he was digging and the other half fills back up again. Frustrated, he tries putting in vertical wood planks to keep the sand out. This works, so he finishes the hole, goes out, grabs his treasure chest and is about to lift it, when the hole fills up with water. The moral of the story is “think before you do something”
Coconuts
We open with a thirsty man stranded on a deserted island near a coconut tree. A coconut falls to the ground beside him. He excitedly tries to open it up to get the milk. He tries using a shell, then a tree branch, then a rock, but with not luck. He tries climbing the coconut tree and throwing the coconut hard to the ground, but it still doesn’t break. Finally he rigs the tree like a catapult and places his coconut on top and launches it straight into the air. Unfortunately when he does this, all of the coconuts in the tree are launched straight up into the air and then come raining down on him. He runs around trying to avoid them, but finally one of them hits him square on the top of the head, driving his whole body into the sand, leaving just his head above the sand. The coconut that hit his head has cracked open next to him and he’s so excited. He tries to move, but he finds that he’s hopelessly stuck in the sand, unable to move. The moral of the story is “think before you do something stupid.”
Flees
We open with a very itchy middle aged man in the bathroom of his apartment with a box of flee powder on the counter. He sprinkles the powder over his body until the itching stops. And then, the flees are pissed. They begin to jump off his body and then bounce back and beat him up. It feels as though he’s in a fight with an invisible opponent. He tries to defend himself by punching or swatting them as they came at him, but to no avail. Until finally he’s hit so hard in the head that he’s knocked to the ground. Dazed, he grabs the powder from off the counter and tosses it into the trash. We close with him battered and broken, sitting against a wall scratching himself. The moral of the story is “be considerate of others.”
The Collector
We open with a very sleepy man sitting at his breakfast table pouring a bowl of cereal. When his bowl is nearly full, a toy rolls out and lands in his bowl. He perks up and grabs the toy. He falls hopelessly in love with the toy. As he’s playing with it, he glances over and sees that the box says “collect all three”. Even more excited, he runs out to buy two more boxes of cereal (this is done all off screen). Back to the table again, he opens one box, reaches in through the cereal and pulls out a toy from the bottom of the box. It’s the second of three. He then opens the last box only to find that it’s the same toy as the first. He runs off to the store to buy 5 more boxes only to find that they are the same as the first two toys. He keeps going in this cycle until he has a table full of toys and he’s opening his last box. Inside he finds the last toy. He’s really excited, but he happens to glance at the latest box and notices that they have added an all new fourth toy. Dejected, he slams his head down on the table, and we pull back to reveal the wall of cereal boxes next to his table. The motion of his head hitting the table causes the wall of cereal to eventually fall like a tidal wave on top of him. The moral of the story is “don’t get pulled into advertising schemes.
Jogger
We open with a professionally equipped yet overweight jogger stretching before a run in his front yard. He stretches all his major muscle groups thoroughly and looks quite confident. He sets off jogging with grace and good form. We fade out and then back in to find him extremely exhausted and his form has completely broken down to where he’s barely moving. Finally he arrives at his destination, a donut shop, and we pull back to reveal that his house is next door to the shop. The moral of the story is “things aren’t away as they seem”
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